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--- report [2023/06/19 22:57] – [Bibliography] team5
+++ report [2023/06/21 18:13] (current) – [1.2 Motivation] team5
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 As a group, we looked over a number of project ideas and decided that the outdoor blimp was the most exciting one. It was a new idea that most of us had never really heard of before, while we were aware of large commercial or private zeppelins, we were unaware of any that could perform smaller duties. We were intrigued by the concept, and it inspired our creativity, which resulted in a wide range of potential uses. The options were limitless, ranging from use of transportation to directions in any city to even serving as props on film shoots. But we were all driven by a desire to build something that could actually improve people's lives.
-Throughout our brainstorming sessions, we concentrated on identifying the global challenges that needed to be resolved. When we conducted our study and brainstorming, we came to the conclusion that many places of the world, such as rural Africa, the high mountains, the deserts, and other distant areas have a lack of network access or even none at all. This insight gave us the idea to design a blimp that may improve network coverage in such regions.
+During our brainstorming sessions, we focused on identifying global challenges that required resolution. As we conducted our study, we discovered a significant issue in Australia: the vast size of cattle farms and the difficulty in effectively monitoring livestock on such large scales.
+This discovery inspired us to think about potential fixes for the issue. We discovered that in these large farmed areas, standard monitoring equipment frequently failed to provide complete coverage and real-time data. This insight motivated us to look into new approaches, which is how we came up with the concept of using a blimp as a surveillance tool for Australian cattle farms.
-As we continued to explore the possibilities, we also considered the potential for our blimp to be used in emergency situations, such as during forest fires or when people are lost in the wilderness. Combining these two ideas, we decided to create a blimp that could both enhance network connectivity in remote areas and provide guidance in emergency situations.
+The limits of traditional monitoring techniques are intended to be overcome by the deployment of a blimp equipped with cutting-edge sensors and technology. Through the introduction of a more effective and comprehensive method of monitoring the welfare and movement of cattle throughout Australia's vast farming landscapes, this technology has the potential to revolutionize livestock monitoring.
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-^ Name                          ^ Salary (month)  ^ Income tax (14.5 %)  ^ Social security employee (11 %)  ^ Social security employer (23.75 %)  ^ Salary after income tax and social security (month)  ^ Salary (year)    ^
+^ Name                          ^ Salary (month)  ^ Income tax ( 14.5 % )  ^ Social security employee ( 11 % )  ^ Social security employer ( 23.75 % )  ^ Salary after income tax and social security (month)  ^ Salary (year)    ^
 | Sonia Gupta                   | 2000 €           | 200 €                | 220 €                            | 475 €                               | 1015 €                                                | 12 180 €           |
 | Krijn Blommestijn             | 2000 €           | 200 €                | 220 €                            | 475 €                               | 1015 €                                                | 12 180 €           |